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Poem on castle's state of mind
May 4, 2011
7:45 am
CastleinIndia
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Hey guys! Well, I don't really write fanfiction. But what I wrote isn't exactly fiction, it's castle's state of mind as I interpret it. It looks like Castle has come to terms with his feelings for Beckett , we all saw it in his eyes. This is how it goes. All positive/negative feedback is welcome!

 

The first day, the first look
Her stern eyes, her guards up
Never to be let down for anyone around
Better to be bold than have a heart that's cold 
 
Her heart longed for revenge, her were eyes full of fury
She only does what's needed
I remember how I was amazed and curious
To know for what this heeded.                                                                                                                                            
She amazed me day after day
And brick by brick, her wall broke
She saw in me what I don't see
The person inside, not the fake show                                                                                                                                      
And now she doesn't hesitate
To tell me what's in her head
But now there's somebody else
She would like so share with instead                                                                                                                             
Neither of us want to admit if what's happening is real
We don't even know if it's happening
Confusion and tension are always there
But with each falling brick the fruit of our bond is ripening                                                                                                                   
Don't know if there's something here that's different from friendship
But I'll tell myself what I do know
Every time she's with him I see the vulnerable side
That I want to comfort, embrace and hold                                                                                                                            
And I'll tell you what I do know
When I look in her eyes and she to mine
There's a moment when everything's perfect
And I see the wonderful side
And I see longing and hope
And so much words unsaid
Till someone lets go of the connection we hold                                                                                                                        
And I'll tell you what I do know
She has wavy hair and hazel eyes
And underneath the tough guard
Is a beautiful heart that lies                                                                                                                                                
Could it be? Is it true?
Would she say this about me too?                                                                                                                                    
This is what I want if this is what she wants
She deserves her share of happiness
She's suffered enough, no more pain
Even if it means she's with what's-his-name                                                                                                                       
I'll patiently wait and be the crying shoulder
And her pain will be free like a dove
The best moments of life are the ones
That I share with the woman I love.                                                                                                                                        
Will we both come clean or just let it be?
Is it killing her like it's killing me?
Her – the tough girl with a soul that's pure
I – the womanizer who fell in love with her                                                                                                                                        
 And I do know that it isn't very good. Thank you for reading :-)
May 4, 2011
8:02 am
lmr32385
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I enjoyed reading the poem. Very good! [Image Can Not Be Found]

Well, it seems to me that the best relationships–the ones that last–are frequently the ones that are rooted in friendship. You know, one day you look at the person and you see something more than you did the night before. Like a switch has been flicked somewhere. And the person who was just a friend is…suddenly the only person you can ever imagine yourself with. ~Dana Scully  Icon made by reema_patel
May 4, 2011
8:09 am
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Thank you ! And it was so nice of you to quote it smile

May 4, 2011
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It was soooo beautiful. I have to admit it brought happy tears to my eyes. [Image Can Not Be Found] Very very well written. Thank you, Now that she is ready to admit her feeling and coming clean with her self we need JOSH <<[Image Can Not Be Found]Booo out NOW [Image Can Not Be Found]Looking forward to many many more. [Image Can Not Be Found]

May 5, 2011
4:17 am
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castletasmic said:

It was soooo beautiful. I have to admit it brought happy tears to my eyes. [Image Can Not Be Found] Very very well written. Thank you, Now that she is ready to admit her feeling and coming clean with her self we need JOSH <<[Image Can Not Be Found]Booo out NOW [Image Can Not Be Found]Looking forward to many many more. [Image Can Not Be Found]

Thanks tasmic I really appreciate your compliments !! Thank you thank you thank you!

May 5, 2011
10:59 am
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Hey, that was great.  You really captured what Castle seems to be feeling.  Good job!

"Make you a deal," she said. "I'll watch my ass, you watch the crowd." - Nikki Heat in Heat Wave Avatar by SKB
May 5, 2011
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Nev827 said:

Hey, that was great.  You really captured what Castle seems to be feeling.  Good job!

Thank you very much! I tried to do justice to both the characters.

May 7, 2011
11:36 am
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it is great ! you're really talented ! keep writing, I'm looking forward more poems from you ! [Image Can Not Be Found]   [Image Can Not Be Found]

"I Castle gay??" "If it's so adorable, why don't you sleep with me? Her me, not me me.."
May 8, 2011
11:54 am
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Loved it!!!!! smile

  "It's not about the books anymore..." - Rick Castle
June 24, 2011
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Aaaaw! That was lovely! 

Her heart longed for revenge, her were eyes full of fury
She only does what's needed
I remember how I was amazed and curious
To know for what this heeded.                                                                                                                                            
That was my favorite verse.
Very well done!  Looking forward to more poems from you.
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