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9:26 pm
March 11, 2010


musiclover

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Lady Brenlis said:

Okay, Peeps, I've got something for you.  A teaser from an upcoming chapter of As Good As On Paper, published separately under the title "Souvenir".        
 
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5808609/1/

I loved the little teaser … Are you gonna make it a two shot

10:16 pm
March 11, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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I plan for it to fit in with my other story, which is looking to be a long one, especially if the panty thing takes on a life of it's own.   I thought it would be good to tide you all over between updates, which is looking to be a while between.  

 

Yesterday, my cousin, who's never seen Castle read the story, AGAOP, and was dying for more, and wanted to know what Castle bought in the shop.  Maybe I'll have a new Castle convert on my hands!  :)

11:29 pm
March 16, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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I had a bad day, and decided what the heck!  I'm just going to publish as I go and hope I don't end up in a corner!  :)  Chapter 6 is up.  Be sure to tell me which title you prefer.  (They're at the end.)  Enjoy!  


URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5759705/6/

5:56 pm
March 17, 2010


SinginPrincess

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Lady Brenlis said:

I had a bad day, and decided what the heck!  I'm just going to publish as I go and hope I don't end up in a corner!  :)  Chapter 6 is up.  Be sure to tell me which title you prefer.  (They're at the end.)  Enjoy!  

URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5759705/6/
 

 


 


 

Awww I'm sorry you  had a bad day…

But I'm not sorry you posted the next chapter! loved it!

As for the title…

 

The Ass-umption and I

 

works for me!


"That was Joe freakin' Torre! I gotta call my dad"

2:08 am
March 28, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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Chapter Seven is up!  Full of Casketty goodness and angst.  Enjoy.  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/57…..s_On_Paper

 

This chapter includes the "Souvenir" teaser.  

 

FYI:  Ultimately, I ended up with The Ass-umption and I for the chapter 6 title.  

11:53 am
March 28, 2010


musiclover

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Just a question so chapter 7 was a flashback right because from what I remember in previous chapter Kate was already pregnant

12:27 pm
March 28, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

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Yes.  I'm using the pregnancy journal entries to help show that.  Hence "Day 1" "Day 2"

1:09 pm
March 28, 2010


musiclover

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posts 1486

Ok sorry

3:32 pm
March 28, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

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No worries.  I always like to be completely certain about these things too.

4:22 pm
March 28, 2010


crazy4castle

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I continue to totally enjoy this story.  Can't wait to see Castle and Beckett discuss the situation further.

Shut The Front Door

5:45 pm
March 28, 2010


Moby Dick

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posts 387

Your husband is  right .

I am very much enjoying your story thus far.  Smile

 

"The heart wants what the Heart wants"

5:45 pm
March 28, 2010


Moby Dick

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"The heart wants what the Heart wants"

6:21 pm
March 28, 2010


neodnut

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posts 443

Loving it! Thank you for sharing.

"I think there's nothing sexier than swordplay." -Stana Katic

1:29 am
April 1, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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Update 8 is up.  Enjoy!  URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5759705/8/

 

Spoilers lurking below!!!  Watch out!

1:48 am
April 1, 2010


ShutTheFrontDoor!

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posts 698

I just checked my email and found a story alert awaiting me! :) I'm loving this story!

Jordan: He cares about you, Kate. You may not see it. You may not be ready to. But he does.

♥ ♥ ♥

Kate: Of course he makes you feel alive but eventually you know he's just going to let you down. So, why risk it?

Castle: Because the heart wants what the heart wants.

2:07 am
April 1, 2010


ShutTheFrontDoor!

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Lady Brenlis said:

Update 8 is up.  Enjoy!  URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5759705/8/

 

 


 

I just finished reading 'Chapter 8'. You are such a tease.

Jordan: He cares about you, Kate. You may not see it. You may not be ready to. But he does.

♥ ♥ ♥

Kate: Of course he makes you feel alive but eventually you know he's just going to let you down. So, why risk it?

Castle: Because the heart wants what the heart wants.

5:31 pm
April 1, 2010


crazy4castle

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I am feeling very gullible today.  How much of this chapter is April Fools?  I hope the apology from Beckett was real.

Shut The Front Door

6:05 pm
April 1, 2010


musiclover

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posts 1486

I can't believe he gave her a fake pregnancy test… I mean that is just so wrong

7:10 pm
April 1, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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crazy4castle said:

I am feeling very gullible today.  How much of this chapter is April Fools?  I hope the apology from Beckett was real.


I'd been planning an apology, although his not wanting to accept her apology was because of the joke.  (Like he said, he didn't deserve it.)     The birthday was the result of the fact that Castle's birthday is on April Fools, so it belonged there.  (Plus it made it more entertaining.)   I've no idea how much of that chapter I'll be using later.  I actually wasn't quite done with the flashbacks.  

 

Musiclover,  It is wrong and that is exactly why it was so difficult to write.  I struggled with it all week long!  Like he said in season 1, he's a smartas* not a jackas*.  Under those circumstances, he'd never pull that on Beckett, and she'd never stand for it if he did.  All that hard-earned trust–out the door!

 

My husband kept bringing the idea up, saying I should make it a fake test, and I told him, "My readers would kill me!"  (Besides, I didn't want to.)  But when he hit on the spin where the joke is actually on the readers, I thought it might be doable.  

 

Hopefully, everyone took it with a sense of humor.  

7:16 pm
April 1, 2010


ShutTheFrontDoor!

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Lady Brenlis said:

My husband kept bringing the idea up, saying I should make it a fake test, and I told him, "My readers would kill me!"  (Besides, I didn't want to.)  But when he hit on the spin where the joke is actually on the readers, I thought it might be doable.  

 

Hopefully, everyone took it with a sense of humor.  


 

I loved it! After I picked my jaw up off the floor, I laughed it off! Very clever!

But I will say one thing- I hope I am never on the receiving end of any sort of prank that you and Admin decide to plan! hahahaha

Jordan: He cares about you, Kate. You may not see it. You may not be ready to. But he does.

♥ ♥ ♥

Kate: Of course he makes you feel alive but eventually you know he's just going to let you down. So, why risk it?

Castle: Because the heart wants what the heart wants.

7:35 pm
April 1, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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posts 167

Thank you so much!

1:22 am
April 2, 2010


SinginPrincess

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posts 281

Haha nice prank! Laugh

"That was Joe freakin' Torre! I gotta call my dad"

12:51 am
April 16, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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posts 167

 

My apologies for not updating As Good As On Paper for so long.  I think my muse is mad at me and decided to obstinate.  

 

But!  

 

I have a new one-shot you will enjoy–especially if you were unhappy after the last episode! It's Caskett Flavor!  :-)  If you liked it, or not, that's what the review button is for!  :D

 

Someday,  added 4/15/10. It's short and romantic: Someday–http://www.fanfiction.net/s/58…../1/Someday

3:56 am
April 16, 2010


hrhighness

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posts 640

Lady Brenlis said:

 

My apologies for not updating As Good As On Paper for so long.  I think my muse is mad at me and decided to obstinate.  

 

But!  

 

I have a new one-shot you will enjoy–especially if you were unhappy after the last episode! It's Caskett Flavor!  :-)  If you liked it, or not, that's what the review button is for!  :D

 

Someday,  added 4/15/10. It's short and romantic: Someday–http://www.fanfiction.net/s/58…../1/Someday


 

Hey Lady Brenlis! I really like your story (not the most eloquent review, but it's past midnight here, so…). The April Fool's prank was very well-done too. I was scratching my head the whole time wondering what was happening… and then BAM! ROFL

Awaiting your muse's cooperation…

"When love beckons to you, follow him, though his ways are hard and steep." — Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet

2:58 am
April 30, 2010


Bren Williams/Lady Brenlis

United States

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posts 167

Yay!  At last!  An update!     A brand spankin' new chapter 8 Readand a brand spankin' new chapter 9!  ReadHope it's worth the wait!  

 

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URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5759705/8/

 

 

 

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